Subject: Re: Build bright lines
From: Bruce Perens <bruce@perens.com>
Date: Mon, 25 Apr 2005 10:26:12 -0700

Chris Zumbrunn wrote:

> I changed it to the Carnegie-Mellon style terminology of "any
> improvements".

"Your honor, my alteration to this program did not improve it." Avoid
subjective terms. "Any modification or addition" pretty much covers it.
And then if you want to protect larger works you would need language
restricting that to a file boundary.

    Thanks

    Bruce