Subject: RE: Right to Use
From: "Lawrence E. Rosen" <>
Date: Tue, 29 Oct 2002 15:07:57 -0800

John Cowan wrote: 
> I think the simplest way to block this reading is to insert 
> "of a Derivative Work" after "External Deployment by You" in 
> the last sentence of Section 5.

Consider it done.  Thanks.  New version at

/Larry Rosen

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