Subject: Re: STWL 1.0, revision 7: please comment
From: Thorsten Glaser <tg@66h.42h.de>
Date: Tue, 23 Nov 2004 13:21:38 +0000 (UTC)

Bernhard Fastenrath dixit:

Wording: good

I -personally- wouldn't use the licence, though.

> If any part of this license might be against the local or otherwise
> relevant law or become ineffective in any other way, the rest of the
> license loses its effect.

What about:
| If a clause of this licence is unenforcable under applicable law, the
| entire licence is void.

> THIS SOFTWARE IS PROVIDED BY THE <project name> PROJECT ``AS IS'' AND

May I suggest, again, you don't use CAPS for the disclaimer?

bye,
//mirabile

PS: IANAL, IAN native English speaker ;)