Subject: Re: A Game (Email - Kelly)
From: Thomas Lord <>
Date: Thu, 13 Apr 2006 16:51:52 -0700

You left out giving us a hint of who your audience is.   Maybe that
should be a separate statement prefixed to the proposal.   In
the call to action you mention "someone" but that's just about "everyone"
and so, effectively, "nobody in particular".

Who should we pretend to be (or be) when evaluating this?